The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, make comparisons where relevant.
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The line graph illustrates how many people went on a holiday on one of the Caribbean islands from 2010 to 2017.
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, it can be seen that the total
number
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of visitors increased dramatically
through
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the years.
In addition
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, in 2010 most of the guests stayed on the island,
while
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in 2017 the majority of tourists stayed on a cruise ship. In the year 2010,
this
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particular Caribbean island had exactly 1
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visitors and
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number
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raised to 1.5
million
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in 2012,
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proceeded with the same tendency, reaching above 2.5
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in 2016.
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, the peak was in 2017, when more than 3.5
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tourists visited the area. In 2010, nearly three-quarters of
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million
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slept on the island, and the remaining quarter stayed on a cruise ship. After 2011 there was a slight growth in the
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of people, who preferred to rent something on the ground and
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count reached 1.5
million
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in the years between 2013 and 2017, with a slide decline in 2016 (1.25
million
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).
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the increasing
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of boat residents, which extended through the years and reached two
million
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in 2017, overtook the count.
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words number, million with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "stayed" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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