You are not satisfied with many problems and with the changing room in a Sports Centre that you visit. Write a letter to the Sports Centre manager. In your letter Explain the problem Say how you feel about this problem What steps you would like manager to take.
Dear Sir, Madam,
I am writing
this
letter to express my frustration about the improper maintenance and cleaning of washrooms and changing rooms in our local sports centre
. Let me explain, I visit the sports centre
every Sunday and I have observed that the management doesn't pay attention to the hygiene and cleaning of washrooms. Every time, the washroom bins are full and sometimes there is no soap to wash hands and no paper towels to wipe the hands. Moreover
, the lock is broken in the fitting room and there is no privacy.
I have been observing these problems for a long time and I also
complained to the management about this
but they didn't respond in a good way and ignored the matter. I feel very bad about the situation and am afraid of diseases which can be spread because of the unhygienic environment in the centre
.
I want you to take strict and quick action towards the management and cleanliness of the sports centre
. Please appoint sweepers to clean the toilets and the area of the centre
and I also
request you to repair the damaged things in the fitting and staff room.
I thank you in anticipation and look forward to a positive response.
Yours Sincerely,
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