The bar chart below shows the percentage of people who ate five portions of fruit and vegetables per day in U.K. from 2001 to 2008.

The chart given below represents the proportion of people who ate five

portions

of fruits and

vegetables

per day in

UK

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in 8 years from 2001 to 2008. The chart clearly shows that the percentage of

Women

who ate five

portions

of

fruit

was higher than both

Men

as well as

Children

over all those years. In the

year

2001, more than 20% of

women

ate 5

portions

of

fruit

whereas

around 17% of

men

ate 5

portions

of

fruit

and around 12.5% of

children

ate 5

portions

of

fruit

. Graphs of both

men

and

women

who ate 5

portions

of

fruits

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increased from the

year

2001 to the

year

2003,

while

the graph of

children

who ate 5

portions

of food was constant. From the

year

2006 to 2008, the percentage of

women

who ate 5

portions

of

fruit

decreased dramatically from more than 30% in 2006 to around 30% in 2008.

Moreover

, the graphs of

men

and

children

who ate 5

portions

of

fruit

also

fell but

with

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a constant rate.

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2006 experienced

the

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peak in the graph. In 2006, more than 30% of

women

ate 5

portions

of

fruit

, 27.5% of

men

ate 5

portions

of

fruit

and

vegetables

and more than 23% of

children

ate 5

portions

of

fruit

and

vegetables

.

To sum up

, the percentage of

total

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population who ate 5

portions

of

fruit

and

vegetables

in the

year

2008 was roughly 1.5 times as compared to the

year

2001.