Some peoole think that cities are the best place to live. Others prefer to live in countryside. Discuss both view and give your opinion.

‏Globalization has pushed

people

to leave suburbs to live in

cities

which caused a growth in the number of residents inside the

cities

. There are

people

who believe that city

life

is the suitable way of living,

while

others claim that the countryside would be better. In my opinion, I believe that living in the modern

cities

these days has numerous benefits for all aspects of

life

. So what makes city

life

so glamorous and attractive? ‏It has been claimed that the smaller the population, the safer the community would be. In their view, dealing with

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group of individuals who participate in similar behaviours will sustain peace and stability in the community.

In addition

to that, there will be a minor amount of air, noise,

moreover

environmental pollution. let's take Detroit as an example, it is a rural area in which the majority of residents share the same traditions.

Therefore

, crime rates are usually low as the percentage of strangers

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usually low. Social

life

in these areas is considerably active so

people

have that pound and connection to each other. Real

estates

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are

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affordable and simple with large gardens and wide open areas. Because the food is usually organic as it contains a lot of agricultural lands and farms for

livestocks

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livestock

, the opportunity to

obligate

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a healthy

life style

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higher than

cities

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in cities

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. ‏

On the other hand

, others argue, and I agree that

cities

especially the major ones have a high number of opportunities to provide

to

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their

people

.

In addition

, the diversity of cultures has a profound effect on the development of both individuals and the country.

For instance

, men and women with high qualifications can find more competitive positions with high income inside the

cities

which will reflect on their financial status and

that is

not available in the suburbs. The chances to live a wealthy

life

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bigger.

However

, if parents wanted to ameliorate their children's skills and education, they would easily find thousands of various schools and activities to apply to. For

undergraduates

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there is a plenty of outstanding universities with good qualifications and

reputation

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so they can secure their future in the shadow of rapid global changes. ‏

To conclude

I believe that settling in

cities

provides more advantages to either families or persons than in the past couple of years. Educational, cultural, and financial benefits are way better than

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.