Some peoole think that cities are the best place to live. Others prefer to live in countryside. Discuss both view and give your opinion.
Globalization has pushed
people
to leave suburbs to live in Use synonyms
cities
which caused a growth in the number of residents inside the Use synonyms
cities
. There are Use synonyms
people
who believe that city Use synonyms
life
is the suitable way of living, Use synonyms
while
others claim that the countryside would be better. In my opinion, I believe that living in the modern Linking Words
cities
these days has numerous benefits for all aspects of Use synonyms
life
. So what makes city Use synonyms
life
so glamorous and attractive?
It has been claimed that the smaller the population, the safer the community would be. In their view, dealing with Use synonyms
limited-known
group of individuals who participate in similar behaviours will sustain peace and stability in the community. Add an article
a limited-known
In addition
to that, there will be a minor amount of air, noise, Linking Words
moreover
environmental pollution. let's take Detroit as an example, it is a rural area in which the majority of residents share the same traditions. Linking Words
Therefore
, crime rates are usually low as the percentage of strangers Linking Words
are
usually low. Social Correct subject-verb agreement
is
life
in these areas is considerably active so Use synonyms
people
have that pound and connection to each other. Real Use synonyms
estates
Fix the agreement mistake
estate
are
affordable and simple with large gardens and wide open areas. Because the food is usually organic as it contains a lot of agricultural lands and farms for Correct subject-verb agreement
is
livestocks
, the opportunity to Correct your spelling
livestock
obligate
a healthy Verb problem
adopt
Use synonyms
life style
Correct your spelling
lifestyle
are
higher than Change the verb form
is
Use synonyms
cities
.
Change preposition
in cities
On the other hand
, others argue, and I agree that Linking Words
cities
especially the major ones have a high number of opportunities to provide Use synonyms
to
their Change preposition
for
people
. Use synonyms
In addition
, the diversity of cultures has a profound effect on the development of both individuals and the country. Linking Words
For instance
, men and women with high qualifications can find more competitive positions with high income inside the Linking Words
cities
which will reflect on their financial status and Use synonyms
that is
not available in the suburbs. The chances to live a wealthy Linking Words
life
Use synonyms
is
bigger. Correct subject-verb agreement
are
However
, if parents wanted to ameliorate their children's skills and education, they would easily find thousands of various schools and activities to apply to. For Linking Words
undergraduates
there is a plenty of outstanding universities with good qualifications and Add a comma
undergraduates,
reputation
so they can secure their future in the shadow of rapid global changes.
Fix the agreement mistake
reputations
To conclude
I believe that settling in Linking Words
cities
provides more advantages to either families or persons than in the past couple of years. Educational, cultural, and financial benefits are way better than Use synonyms
countryside
.Add an article
the countryside
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