The graph below shows the number of shops that closed and the number of new shops that opened in one country between 2011 and 2018. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the number of shops that closed and the number of new shops that opened in one country between 2011 and 2018. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The chart illustrates the amount of
stores
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closing and opening in a certain country from 2011 to 2018.
Overall
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, the amount of
stores
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opening showed a gradual decline in the span of seven years,
while
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the
number
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of
stores
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closing reflected a fluctuation over the same period. In the beginning, there were 8500
stores
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that were opened, which later became the highest
number
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of
shops
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opened until 2018.
However
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, the numbers
then
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significantly declined to more than half in the next year. Starting from 2012 until 2014, fortunately, the numbers gradually rose by two thousand. Despite the addition, after 2014 onwards, the
number
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of
shops
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did not show growth
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and plummeted in 2018 with only 3000
shops
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which were opened. Contrary to
shops
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’ openings, the
number
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of
shops
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’ closures at the start of the time span is not as high as the openings, marked at 6500
shops
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. A
number
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of
stores
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’ closings were always much bigger than the openings, except for 2011 and 2015. The total highest recorded for
stores
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’ closing was in 2013 with slightly over 7000
stores
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, and the lowest was in 2015 with 500
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, making a 6500 difference between.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words stores, number, shops with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "showed" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 5 times.
Vocabulary: The word "decline" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "gradual" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • retail landscape
  • net growth
  • market dynamics
  • economic indicators
  • fluctuations
  • pivotal
  • consumption patterns
  • e-commerce
  • brick-and-mortar
  • downward/upward trend
  • stabilize
  • recession
  • boom
  • retail sector
  • closure rate
  • inauguration/opening rate
  • consumer market
  • saturate
  • commercial viability
  • profitability
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