The plans below show a public park when it first opened in 1920 and the same park today. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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in Grange estate from its first opening in 1920 to the present.

Overall

, it is evident that the park has been re-arranged significantly and the playground is extended with many modern facilities

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as an amphitheatre, a children’s play area, …

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some buildings are destructed to elect another structure. First of all, in 1920, there were 2 entrances for people to come in, which were located in the northern and southern of the

garden

and still remain at the moment.

Besides

that, 1 of 2 rose gardens, which were built in the northwestern and southwestern of the forest, is destroyed and only one

garden

remains in the northwestern ones.

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stage for musicians was rebuilt on a big scale and served as an amphitheatre for concerts.

In addition

, there was a fountain put in the centre of the public estate in 1920 but

this

figure is destructed and rebuilt as another huge rose

garden

with many seats surrounded.

Therefore

, at the northeastern corner, a children’s play area and café

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built to replace the pond for water plants and another rose

garden

in the past.

Finally

, there is the prominent water feature, which is substituted for the old glasshouse, is

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next to the south entrance. In conclusion, the playground has changed significantly since it first opened in 1920, many modern infrastructures

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added to the park to broaden

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scale, so it's easier to attract clients but

this

square still retains its uniqueness.