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Children have more and more tests and exams to do at school,sometimes starting from the age of five or six,right up until the age of 18. What are the advantages and disadvantages of making children do exams?

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Nowadays,
children
 are forced to do so many
exams
 in the
school
.Every so often,
children
 take tests and
exams
 from the time they enter grade until they graduate high
school
.There are obviously some positive and negative appearing for
exams
 at
such
young
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 age.
This
 essay will examine the advantages and disadvantages of having kids take
exams
 at
school
. There are
plethora
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 of pros sides to
do
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exams
 and tests for pupils at
school
.
Firstly
,
exams
 promote
compitation
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competition
 among
children
, and
prepering
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preparing
youngsters
 for the competitive world.
That is
 to say,when these
youngsters
 will become
adult
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 they have to prove themselves
education
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 and employment. In turn,it encourages students to work harder to improve their knowledge and skills.What is more ,
school
exams
 can motivate pupils to study and work hard to achieve good grades,leading to a better
understunding
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understanding
 of the subject.
Hence
,schools are inclined to arrange
exams
 for
children
. Like every coin has
another sides
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.
sending
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youngsters
 to the exam hall has some drawbacks as well. Pupils start to give less importance
for
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sport
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 and other activities, which can have ill effects on the student's health.Another drawback is that
exams
 can cause stress and anxiety.Evaluation of students with peers and parental pressure to make progress in each exam can
further
 deteriorate
children
's mental stability.
To conclude
, though
exams
 are an indispensable part of student life pressuring
youngsters
 at a very young age to attend
exams
 sometimes does not bring positive results always.
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