The diagram below shows the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago and how it looks now. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make a comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
The map illustrates a central library’s level 20 years before and its current version.
Overall
, a huge number of changes were made in 20 years, additionally
, each room was
designed differently nowadays.
The first contrasting difference is that tables and chairs that were in the middle of the library were moved away. Wrong verb form
is
Furthermore
,a reading room (with newspapers and magazines) was replaced with a computer area, while
next to the reading area was an enquiry desk, where various services were provided such
as giving tickets and book returns, which was changed to a cafe. Moreover
, the zone with computer games, videos and CDs vanished, instead
of it a children’s fiction books
zone with sofas appeared, where storytelling events are organized. A Lecture place also
came up recently shifting the children’s books
chamber.
In addition
, the section with adult fiction books
was turned into all
reference Correct article usage
an all
books
area, this
sector
was relocated to the right part of the library, where adult fiction Correct your spelling
section
books
used to be. Besides
, an information desk and self-service machines are there right now near this
section.Submitted by kama.star.00 on
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Vocabulary: Replace the words books with synonyms.
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