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reason
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on
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of people
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to
neighbors
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are
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neighbours
reason
for this
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hang
out with friends , especially meeting their Wrong verb form
hanging
neighbors
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of
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life
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were dedicated
on
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to
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apply
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apply
nowadays
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neighbors
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meeting
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people
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neighbours
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relationships
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