The graph below shows electricity production (in terawatt hours) in France between 1980 and 2012

The graph below shows electricity production (in terawatt hours) in France between 1980 and 2012
This
graph depicts 4 resources of energy production in France over 30
years
.
Overall
,
while
hydroelectric, renewables, and thermal experienced a negligible change, the most dramatic increase was seen in nuclear. Standing at 50
terawatt
hours
, electricity produced by nuclear power was 50 times higher than renewable sources, the lowest.
After
this
number rocketed and hit the highest point at 451
terawatt
hours
in 2005, it decreased slightly to 440
terawatt
hours
at the end
of the observed period.
By contrast
, before renewables sources witnessed a moderate growth of 25
terawatt
hours
in 2010,
this
figure remained unchanged over 15
years
.
On the other hand
, the number of electricity produced by thermal, which stood at 125
terawatt
horse, was the highest resource in 1980 declined by 75 units over 5
years
then
remained unchanged from 1985 to 2010, at 50
terawatt
.
Although
after fluctuating around 75
terawatt
over 25
years
, hydroelectric remained stable at 50
terawatt
hours
for the rest of the observed period
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