People in your area are having problems with their Internet connections. Write a letter to this company which provides the connection. In your letter 1. describe the problems 2. explain how they are affecting people 3. say what the company should do to help You don't need to write any address

Dear Thomas, I am writing a complain about the poor
Internet
connection
at Iqbal Town. The
Internet
services of your Company is giving poor quality of network. Whenever I use PTCL
internet
I face issues regarding your
connection
.
However
, the
last
Wi-Fi was not good and I didn't find any high-quality
connection
.
Besides
this
, I saw your Company's ad in the newspaper you are giving 4G high-speed
Internet
access to the customers. When I installed it at my house it was good at first but after some days their speed was low and interrupted my
work
.
However
,as
abusiness
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a business
person
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my whole
work
is on the
Internet
and it is frustrating too much that I cannot give my
work
on time.
Therefore
, I couldn't provide
work
on time
due to
many clients
are
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being left.
Consequently
, it is affecting my
work
and money
as well as
my reputation is affected. I would like to suggest you to please check your
connection
and update with 5G
Internet
.
Furthermore
, you may
also
buy new devices for
Internet
connection
. If your services upgrade I will give my
work
to the clients on time. I am looking forward to hearing from you as soon as possible. Yours Sincerely,
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • unreliable
  • intermittent
  • downtime
  • bandwidth
  • inconvenience
  • frustration
  • compensation
  • service outage
  • customer satisfaction
  • technical support
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