People in your area are having problems with their Internet connections. Write a letter to this company which provides the connection. In your letter 1. describe the problems 2. explain how they are affecting people 3. say what the company should do to help You don't need to write any address

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Dear Thomas, I am writing a complain about the poor
Internet
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connection
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at Iqbal Town. The
Internet
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services of your Company is giving poor quality of network. Whenever I use PTCL
internet
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I face issues regarding your
connection
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.
However
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, the
last
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Wi-Fi was not good and I didn't find any high-quality
connection
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.
Besides
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this
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, I saw your Company's ad in the newspaper you are giving 4G high-speed
Internet
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access to the customers. When I installed it at my house it was good at first but after some days their speed was low and interrupted my
work
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.
However
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,as
abusiness
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a business
person
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person,
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my whole
work
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is on the
Internet
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and it is frustrating too much that I cannot give my
work
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on time.
Therefore
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, I couldn't provide
work
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on time
due to
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many clients
are
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being left.
Consequently
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, it is affecting my
work
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and money
as well as
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my reputation is affected. I would like to suggest you to please check your
connection
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and update with 5G
Internet
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.
Furthermore
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, you may
also
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buy new devices for
Internet
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connection
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. If your services upgrade I will give my
work
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to the clients on time. I am looking forward to hearing from you as soon as possible. Yours Sincerely,
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task achievement
Ensure to fully address all required points in the task prompt.
coherence and cohesion
Organize the letter into clearly structured paragraphs, and use appropriate greeting and closing for a formal letter.
lexical resource
Expand your range of vocabulary and use formal and appropriate language for a complaint letter.
grammatical range
Work on the accuracy and complexity of your sentence structures for a more formal tone in the letter.

Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • unreliable
  • intermittent
  • downtime
  • bandwidth
  • inconvenience
  • frustration
  • compensation
  • service outage
  • customer satisfaction
  • technical support
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