People in your area are having problems with their Internet connections. Write a letter to this company which provides the connection. In your letter 1. describe the problems 2. explain how they are affecting people 3. say what the company should do to help You don't need to write any address
Dear Thomas,
I am writing a complain about the poor
Internet
connection
at Iqbal Town.
The Internet
services of your Company is giving poor quality of network. Whenever I use PTCL internet
I face issues regarding your connection
. However
, the last
Wi-Fi was not good and I didn't find any high-quality connection
. Besides
this
, I saw your Company's ad in the newspaper you are giving 4G high-speed Internet
access to the customers. When I installed it at my house it was good at first but after some days their speed was low and interrupted my work
.
However
,as abusiness
Correct your spelling
a business
person
my whole Add a comma
person,
work
is on the Internet
and it is frustrating too much that I cannot give my work
on time. Therefore
, I couldn't provide work
on time due to
many clients are
being left. Unnecessary verb
apply
Consequently
, it is affecting my work
and money as well as
my reputation is affected.
I would like to suggest you to please check your connection
and update with 5G Internet
. Furthermore
, you may also
buy new devices for Internet
connection
. If your services upgrade I will give my work
to the clients on time.
I am looking forward to hearing from you as soon as possible.
Yours Sincerely,Submitted by mobinadurrani43 on
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task achievement
Ensure to fully address all required points in the task prompt.
coherence and cohesion
Organize the letter into clearly structured paragraphs, and use appropriate greeting and closing for a formal letter.
lexical resource
Expand your range of vocabulary and use formal and appropriate language for a complaint letter.
grammatical range
Work on the accuracy and complexity of your sentence structures for a more formal tone in the letter.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite