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The diagram below shows how rocks are created and destroyed in the rock cycle

The diagram below shows how rocks are created and destroyed in the rock cycle
#rocks #rock #cycle
The graph
illustrated
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 the life cycle of the
mosquito
.
Overall
,
mosquito
 have an average lifespan and their lifespan consist
to
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of
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 five main stages: started from eggs, larva, pupa,
adult
 emerges, and
adult
. Which is
two
 of the stages occur in the water and the other
two
 able to survive
at
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in
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two
 habitats. The life cycle
begin
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begins
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 when the mature
Mosquito
 yields the egg and
laid
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lies
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 in
humid
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a humid
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 place usually
at
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on
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 the
suface
Correct your spelling
surface
 of water, after a that the mature egg
came
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turns
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 into a larva and
reside
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resides
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 in the water until
came to
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apply
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the next stage which is pupa, after
reach
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reaches
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 the fourth
phase
,
whereas
 known as
adult
 emerges
phase
, that
phase
 was happened at
two
 conditions but it should a humid site before it thrives to a
adult
.
Then
, after
turn
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turning
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 into
adult
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the adult
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phase
 the
mosquito
able
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is able
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 to fly and migrate to the mainland, notably, the free air to seek and suck blood from
others
Correct quantifier usage
other
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 living things
as
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for
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 its survival.
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words mosquito, adult, two, phase with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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