The chart below shows what Anthropology graduates from one university did after finishing their undergraduate degree course. The table shows the salaries of the anthropologists in work after five years. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows what Anthropology graduates from one university did after finishing their undergraduate degree course. The table shows the salaries of the anthropologists in work after five years.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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Both graphs provide information about Anthropology alumni. The pie chart displays the proportions of different career paths after graduation,
whereas
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the table illustrates former students' wages
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their occupation. Regarding the pie chart, the most favoured type of employment is
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job and accounts for roughly half of all the categories. Some of those who have graduated
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  prefer part-time
work
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or remain unemployed representing 15 and 13%, respectively.
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, there is the same share of those who prefer full-time postgraduate study and those, whose information on the type of occupation is not given.
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, the least popular career path is a part-time job
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postgraduate study which constitutes about 5%. The table reveals that the largest percentage of those, who have five years of
work
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experience in freelance consulting earn from 75 to more than 100 thousand dollars a year,
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the former students who decide to
work
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in the government sector are even more likely to have a 100 thousand dollars wage a year. Regarding the alumni after five years of working in private companies, only 10% have a salary of $25-49.000,
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other wages vary from 50 to 100+ thousand.
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, the most
preffered
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career path after graduation is a full-time job and the least is
a
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part-time
work
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+ postgraduate study. Admittedly, the lowest percentage of former students have a minimum salary and most of them earn more than the average.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "whereas".
Vocabulary: Replace the words work with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
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