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Most Countries allow 18 year olds to start driving a car. Some say it is good to allow it at this age, while others think that the age to start driving should be at least 25. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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Maximum countries provide
driving
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licence
 at 18 years old. Though some people opine that
this
 is the best age
of
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 getting a driving
licence
, others suggest
for
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25 years old. I support the former one. Those who support
the
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 driving
licence
 at
early
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an early
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 age may argue that it is important to move from one place to another for their daily needs.
For instance
, developed countries, like Italy, Germany or the USA, are familiar with early driving as they are getting the car
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at in
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in
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an
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 early age.
Moreover
, it is
the
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 mandatory part of their daily lives.
Otherwise
, they need to spend a huge amount of money and time
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travelining
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travelling
 a short distance.
Furthermore
, to
fulfill
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 their demand, they will go out with their cars either having
licence
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a licence
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 or not,
wherd
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where
 licenceless driving is a punishable crime for any society.
As a result
,
licence
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the licence
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 is
the
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 valid way of using the car.
On the other hand
, young drivers drive their cars recklessly.
Therefore
, road accidents increase.
In contrast
, adult people are more sincere about the speed of their car. They try to follow the traffic rules and remember the safety procedures.
Thereafter
, the number of accidents decreases and travelers are safe on the road. A survey, which was done by the University of Dhaka, shows that 85% of the accidents in Dhaka
were
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happenned
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happened
due to
 the speedy driving of teenagers. In conclusion, it can be said that though
early
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an early
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licence
 has
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the drawback
a drawback
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drawback
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drawbacks
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 of
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the accident
an accident
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accident
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accidents
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, it has some benefits, like saving time and money, which are more attractive.
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