Most Countries allow 18 year olds to start driving a car. Some say it is good to allow it at this age, while others think that the age to start driving should be at least 25. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Maximum countries provide
driving
Correct article usage
a driving
licence
at 18 years old. Though some people opine that Use synonyms
this
is the best age Linking Words
of
getting a driving Change preposition
for
licence
, others suggest Use synonyms
for
25 years old. I support the former one.
Those who support Change preposition
apply
the
driving Correct article usage
a
licence
at Use synonyms
early
age may argue that it is important to move from one place to another for their daily needs. Add an article
an early
For instance
, developed countries, like Italy, Germany or the USA, are familiar with early driving as they are getting the car Linking Words
Change preposition
at in
in
early age. Correct your spelling
an
Moreover
, it is Linking Words
the
mandatory part of their daily lives. Correct article usage
a
Otherwise
, they need to spend a huge amount of money and time Linking Words
for
Change preposition
apply
travelining
a short distance. Correct your spelling
travelling
Furthermore
, to Linking Words
fulfill
their demand, they will go out with their cars either having Change the spelling
fulfil
Use synonyms
licence
or not, Add an article
a licence
wherd
licenceless driving is a punishable crime for any society. Correct your spelling
where
As a result
, Linking Words
Use synonyms
licence
is Add an article
the licence
a licence
the
valid way of using the car.
Correct article usage
a
On the other hand
, young drivers drive their cars recklessly. Linking Words
Therefore
, road accidents increase. Linking Words
In contrast
, adult people are more sincere about the speed of their car. They try to follow the traffic rules and remember the safety procedures. Linking Words
Thereafter
, the number of accidents decreases and travelers are safe on the road. A survey, which was done by the University of Dhaka, shows that 85% of the accidents in Dhaka Linking Words
were
Unnecessary verb
apply
happenned
Correct your spelling
happened
due to
the speedy driving of teenagers.
In conclusion, it can be said that though Linking Words
early
Correct article usage
an early
licence
has Use synonyms
Add an article
the drawback
a drawback
drawback
of Fix the agreement mistake
drawbacks
Add an article
the accident
an accident
accident
, it has some benefits, like saving time and money, which are more attractive.Fix the agreement mistake
accidents
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