the table below shows the changes in some household types in canada from 1984 to 2020
This
table illustrates the different family compositions or individuals who live
in a house in Canada from 1984 until 2020 in percentages.
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Overall
, in 1984, one-family households with dependent children
covered the highest percentage
compared to “Lone parent
” who had the lowest Fix the agreement mistake
parents
percentage
. From 1984 until 2020, there was an increase in family structure where people were living alone whilst there was a decrease in one-family households.
In 1984, Lone parent was in only 4% with the lowest percentage
. This
group, however
, surprisingly increased to 12% in 2020. Moreover
, the category of individuals who were living alone increased from 6% in 1984 to 12% in 2020. In contrast
, the percentage
of parents with dependent children
decreased dramatically from 1984 to 2020, 52% and 36% respectively. Finally
, the households of the family with non-dependent children
from 1984 and 2020, had a slight fluctuation over the years. Couples with no children
increased steadily during the given period.Submitted by Andrea Barreto on
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