Some people believe that arts (such as painting and music) do not improve people's life therefore the government should not spend money on it. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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the

government

should curtail the budget

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arts

. I partly agree with

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below. There are several

reasons

why public money should not be spent on

arts

. For one thing, the

government

has to use the taxes more practically.

This

is because the division of budget can directly affect a myriad of people’s lives.

For example

, if the

government

decides to allocate a budget to education

instead

of

arts

, free tuition, academic subsidies and more improved school facilities can be achieved, relieving the gap between the rich and the poor. In spite of the

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mentioned above, I support the idea that the

government

should invest in

arts

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the arts

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. First and foremost,

art works

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artworks

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are the major heritage of mankind, reflecting the society and the culture. Case in point, Monalisa by da Vinci, Almond Blossom by van Gogh, and The Son of Man by Magritte represent different ages, respectively.

Therefore

, the authorities should spend enough money to preserve these masterpieces, spreading not only artistic values but

also

historical properties. Second,

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arts

can effectively convey important messages to people.

Due to

the fact that

arts

can unleash sympathy, compassion and inspiration more easily than an address or short writings.

For instance

, Life is Beautiful, which is a movie

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terms

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Holocaust and The Second World War, can elicit an immersion

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warning

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tragedy of war. For these

reasons

, it is worth vitalizing the

arts

. In a nutshell,

although

some people contend that the

government

should aim at other goals

instead

of supporting art, the investment

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in art is needed for the

reasons

related to cultural and emotional values.