Some people think that mobile phone should be banned in public places such as libraries, shops and on public transport. To what extend do you agree or disagree with this statement?

The increase in phone usage caused us to be connected all the time and it has become difficult to turn our

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off. Some may argue that mobiles ought to be prohibited in public areas,

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libraries, shops and on public transport.

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it is true that mobile

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can be disruptive in public

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, if used

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responsibly

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they can be quite useful.

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reason, banning them completely is not a good idea. Mobile

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in public

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can disturb others. Talking loudly or watching videos

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full volume is not considered good etiquette,

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especially

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like libraries and

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, where people come to have a relaxing experience. In some cases,

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can be a safety hazard.

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, if in a bus full of people everyone is being loud using their devices, the driver could have

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focusing on the road.

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source of distraction could lead to a tragic accident. 154 As seen before, a non-responsible

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of mobile

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can be terribly dangerous.

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proper

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can be quite convenient.

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, when on a bus using a map App can help people reach their destination safely or listening to a podcast or to some music

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shopping in a public place can improve our experience. Despite

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, the

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of

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in public crowded

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stricter etiquette. In some countries,

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such

as the Netherlands, there are

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certain

train carriages where it is illegal to be loud or

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a phone without headphones.

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is a great idea for those who

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to travel undisturbed by others,

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those who don't mind can stay in the other wagons. Creating similar rules, where citizens' freedom

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their personal devices isn't limited, can lead to safer and more peaceful public

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environments

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. In conclusion, the reckless

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of mobile

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in public

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can be a distraction and

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a safety hazard. To avoid unpleasant situations,

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should not be banned, but their

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ought to be regulated.