The chart below shows the amount spent on six consumer goods in four European countries. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below. (Numbers mean “thousand”)
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The given data illustrates the expenses of six client products in Britain, France, Italy and Germany.
The initial impression from the chart is the sales rate of all goods is the highest in Britain,
whereas
the indicated in chart
products’ Correct article usage
the chart
buy-and -selling
level in Germany is much lower and the other significant pattern Correct your spelling
buy-and-selling
that
Add a missing verb
is that
population
of given four European countries spends much more money on photographic film than on personal stereos, Correct article usage
the population
although
Germans
buy toys and CDs even less.
The French and the Italians spend slightly over 150 000 on toys,
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apply
when
the Correct word choice
while
Germans
spend around 145 000 which is the same amount they spend on CDs, however
, the Germans
spend just over 145 000 on personal stereos like as
people in France.
The biggest amount of expenses can be indicated in Britain on photographic film, where British people spend Change preposition
apply
on
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apply
the
Remove the article
apply
it
nearly 170 thousand, Correct pronoun usage
apply
while
Germans
buy the same good
Fix the agreement mistake
goods
fewer
less and spend around 150 thousand.Correct word choice
apply
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