The table below shows the number of student who went abroad for further education from eight countries in 2005 and 2015, and the precentage change betwwen 2005 and 2015

The table below shows the number of student who went abroad for further education from eight countries in 2005 and 2015, and  the precentage change betwwen  2005 and 2015
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The given table illustrates the
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of
students
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studying overseas for higher education from eight nations in 2005 and 2015.
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, there were 5 countries experiencing an increase in the proportion of
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studying abroad during the period given.
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, Canada and India had a decreased percentage except South Korea remained steady over the period.
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with, during 10 Years the percentage of people studying abroad in Brazil had changed significantly by 109 % in total, making it become country sending the highest
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of
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among Those. China and India which occupied second and third place
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had a high
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of
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that had a difference of just 1 % at 98 % and 97 % respectively. The United States and Germany reported that the
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have a passion for studying at overseas universities almost half as much as the
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of
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from China and India 49 % and 44 %
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, as many as 30.000
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from Japan were recorded studying abroad during 10 years from 2005 until 2015. An increase of 27 % was experienced by Canada which in 2015 only sent 23.000
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studying abroad. from all of Those , South Korea has undergone the same Trend for 10 years with 107.000
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studying abroad.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words number, students with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • number
  • student
  • abroad
  • further education
  • countries
  • percentage change
  • 2005
  • 2015
  • table
  • data
  • trend
  • comparison
  • pattern
  • changes
  • factors
  • contributing
  • summarize
  • findings
  • observations
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