Some people think that one of the best ways to solve environmental problems is to increase the cost of fuel. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In the contemporary era, every country is facing issues in order to safeguard
environment
from harmful Add an article
the environment
emission
of gases Fix the agreement mistake
emissions
therefore
efforts are being made to spike in cost
of fuel
. I believe that only hike
in Correct article usage
a hike
fuel
is not realistic
approach. Some people will continue to use these petroleum products even if Add an article
a realistic
cost
will be increased for these services in Add an article
the cost
near
future. I completely disagree with Correct article usage
the near
this
statement. This
essay will discuss the idea and will justify my opinion.
On one
hand, environmental issues are Correct article usage
the one
major
concern for everyone as Add an article
a major
huge
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a huge
the huge
increase
in population and meeting their requirements are biggest
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concerns
of
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the
countries. For Correct article usage
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meeting
the daily needs of individuals, there are Wrong verb form
meet
provision
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provisions
of
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for
increase
in Correct article usage
an increase
usage
of transportation which is Correct article usage
the usage
further
adding harmful pollution and detrimental effects to every living being. For example
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published in Add an article
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Times
of IndiaCorrect article usage
the Times
,
indicated that Remove the comma
apply
cost
of petroleum products Correct article usage
the cost
is
already increased when Verb problem
has
compare
to a decade ago, Change the form of the verb
compared
still
there are spike in Correct word choice
but still
number
of vehicles on Change the article
a number
the number
road
and increasing day by day. Correct article usage
the road
This
is proven that even if authorities will
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apply
increase
cost
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the cost
fuel
but
no impact is observed on Correct word choice
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usage
of transportation.
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other
hand, there is a need Correct article usage
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of
alternative Change preposition
for
source
of Fix the agreement mistake
sources
energy
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spike
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a spike
the spike
cost
of Add an article
the cost
fuel
services. Relevant authorities and energy
conservationist
should focus on other Fix the agreement mistake
conservationists
sources
of energy
. For instance
, Ministry
of Biodiversity should focus on other renewable Correct article usage
the Ministry
sources
of energy
like fossil fuel
, methane gas so on. By these
small efforts will be able to save our planet from harmful pollution and efforts are being made to find other Change preposition
These
sources
of energy
.
To conclude
, by increase
in cost
of petroleum Add an article
the cost
product
alone will not Fix the agreement mistake
products
able
to solve environmental problems, Add a missing verb
be able
therefore
there is requirement
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a requirement
the requirement
of
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for
conservative
approach by both authorities and our Correct article usage
a conservative
scientist
so that we will not face detrimental issues by depleting our Fix the agreement mistake
scientists
energy
sources
for our upcoming generation.Submitted by deep.amans86 on
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Task Achievement
Consider providing a clearer introduction that directly addresses the prompt by stating your position clearly, whether you agree or disagree with the increase in the cost of fuel as a solution to environmental problems. The conclusion should also directly restate your position and summarize the main points of your argument.
Coherence and Cohesion
Work on the logical flow and clarity of your ideas. Use clear topic sentences at the beginning of each paragraph and ensure that each paragraph has one main idea that is further developed and supported with specific examples or explanations.
Lexical Resource
Expand your vocabulary by using a wider range of synonyms and less common words to articulate your ideas more precisely. Avoid repetition of the same words or phrases and try to demonstrate a flexible use of language.
Grammatical Range
Improve your grammatical range by using a variety of complex sentence structures and ensuring subject-verb agreement. Pay attention to the correct use of articles, prepositions, and conjunctions to enhance the accuracy of your writing.