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Some people think that newspapers are the best way to learn about the news. However, others believe that they can learn the news more effectively through other media. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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It is believed that the best way for
people
 to get the
news
 is
newspapers
,
while
 others think other
media
 can help them get the
news
 better. I will discuss both views in my essay below. On the one hand, reliable resources for
people
 to learn about the
news
is
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newspapers
. To elaborate, it is a traditional way that
people
 from the past until now in order to get the
news
 and
people
 can know exactly about detailed
information
of
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about
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 it.
For example
,
at
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the
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of
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the
news
on
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in
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newspapers
,
it
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always mentioned the name of the author and where it was published.
Therefore
,
people
 can
base
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rely
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 on it to get the
news
 without confusion
whether
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about whether
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 the
new
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news
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 is true or not.
On the other hand
, it is
media
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the media
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 that allow
people
 to get the
news
.
This
 is because
media
 helps readers catch up with the
news
 immediately and contains
variety
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a variety
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 of sources of
information
. For
instances
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instance
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,
Internet
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the Internet
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 can allow
people
access
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to access
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through
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apply
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many websites in seconds without waiting so long and it not only provides texts about the
news
 like
traditional
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the traditional
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 way
,
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 but
also
 contains
colored
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 pictures and videos.
This
 helps readers save time but
also
 absorb enough
information
 in the
news
were
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posted on other
media
. In conclusion, personally, both ways for readers to get the
news
 are effective.
Although
newspapers
 can help
people
 get exact
information
,
reaing
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reading
news
by
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from
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 other
media
 is more convenient for
people
 to remember the
news
.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • news coverage
  • perspectives
  • opinions
  • accessed
  • interactive
  • engaging
  • real-time
  • multimedia
  • combination
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