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The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparions where relevant. The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparions where relevant.

The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparions where relevant. The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparions where relevant.
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The given polyline illustrates the proportion figures of visitors who
visit
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 different areas on Caribbean
Island
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 from 2010 to 2017. Having a myopic look,
it is clear that
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 the total number of
tourists
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 preferred to
visit
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 the Caribbean
Island
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 than stay on
cruise
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 ships and stayed on the
island
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,
while
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he
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the
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 least popular mode of visitor place was
cruise
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 dispatch.
Moreover
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, the rate of
tourists
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 were stayed on the
island
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 rose gradually. The number of
tourists
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 that stayed on the
Island
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 started at nearly 1
million
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 and remained the same till 2011
then
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 it started to increase moderately till 2017 to reach its peak at 15
million
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 people.
Besides
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, in 2010, the rate of visitors staying on
cruise
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 ships was just under half in the first year and
then
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 grew moderately to reach 2
million
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 in 2017.
Furthermore
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, the total number of people started at 1
million
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 in 2010
then
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 it climbed sharply to attain its peak in 2017 at 3.5
million
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.
To sum up
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,
tourists
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 have different locations that they prefer to
visit
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. A total of them like to
visit
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 the Caribbean islands. Unlike others, most of them like to stay on
cruise
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 ships.
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Introduction: The introduction is missing.
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words visit, island, tourists, cruise, million with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "reach" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "stay" was used 5 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "moderately" was used 2 times.
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