Governments should spend money on railways rather than roads. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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Infrastructure development plays a crucial role in a nation's progress and economic growth. I strongly agree with
this
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point of view which government should prioritize
invest
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more budget
on
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in
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railways
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because
they
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they are
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environmentally friendly. To embark on, funding
railways
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encourage green travel.
one
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of the major reason
to
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for
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construction
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the construction
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of
railways
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is their efficiency and sustainability.
Railways
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have
huge
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capacity to fit
the
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a
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considerable amount of
passenger
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passengers
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,
therefore
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it could be
consequence
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a consequence
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of reducing traffic congestion and
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wasting time
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to accomplish
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all the work.
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, focus on
enhancement
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the enhancement
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of roads
cause
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causes
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of
increasing
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increase
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the
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in the
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emission of toxic gases and
effect
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affects
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on
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apply
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public health and
atmosphere
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the atmosphere
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.
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,
the
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a
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country like India
transfer
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transfers
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multitudinous
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a multitudinous
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population all
the
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apply
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day with
railways
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.
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, investing in
train
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the train
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system
have
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vast benefits
on
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economic and social. Trains can export and
imports
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import
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freight and cargo in widely used between countries.
it
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can
be expand
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international trade and bring many
appanages
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advantages
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to
country
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the country
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.
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,
this
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kind of investment would allow to establish tourism and attract more visitors,
as well as
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foreign investors.
in
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hence
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, promoting connecting between cities by modern trains, can improve and escalate the local industry
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by
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absorbing tourism.
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,
to
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in
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compare
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with roads, the statistic
accident
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accidents
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which
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going on the roads is much more than the
railways
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.
Thus
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, in my
of
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thinking, allocating a great budget
on
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for
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railway
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the railway
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cause of
benefits
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the benefits
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on
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of
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social, economic and
environment
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would be a wise decision.
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  • Regional development
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  • Flexibility
  • Rural areas
  • Integration
  • Sustainable
  • Efficiency
  • Infrastructure
  • Commuters
  • Public expenditure
  • Autonomous vehicles
  • Long-term investment
  • Accessibility
  • Connectivity
  • Modal shift
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