In some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people. Why might this be the case? Do you think this is a positive or negative situation?

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of the world,

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their own accommodation and

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part of them prefer that, they

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have their own

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rather than renting one. Because

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they sense which could save

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in interval long term. From my perspective,

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ownership is a natural human desire.

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life needs stability and

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in peace. against all

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that

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residence

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house

can make, many

people

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to have at least one of

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replace renting.

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for

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personal housing is a prevalent method

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all over the world.

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and

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peacefully without the intervention of others, are small benefits of

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ownership. Admittedly, in several

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, it is really hard to own a

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of the population and you

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up paying heavy rent.

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must pay a huge part of their incomes to the landlords every month.

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, others think that buying a luxury home is

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of

money

. They believe that it is wrong to have a lot of capital to own a

house

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they can make income generation and make profit from that. Not only is it wrong to buy a

house

for

people

who do not have enough income or wealth, but

also

, they could start a business with it and after that, can buy their own land from their profit. From

then

on, they would not probably squander

money

on useless things.

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, when

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to buy

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a home

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, their shopping or eating

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will be changed to allocate

money

for buying a

house

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, renting a property means that the tenant is at the mercy of the landlords and it cannot save

money

in

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.

Hence

, owning a

house

provide

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sense

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a sense

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of stability and security throughout life.