The chart below shows the changes in three different areas of crime in MAnchester city center from 2003-2012.
This
chart illustrates the frequency of crime
Replace the word
criminal
act
in Manchester. It is divided into 3 Fix the agreement mistake
acts
type
of crimes, that are burglary, car theft, and robbery from 2003 to 2012. Change to a plural noun
types
Overall
, burglary took the highest record with 3750 records in 2004.
From the chart, it shows that the number
of robbery are the lowest number
compared the
2 others. The growth was quite constant. The highest Change preposition
to the
number
was happened
in 2005 with 900 reports, Verb problem
apply
while
the lowest number
was happened
in 2008 with 500 reports.
Verb problem
apply
Next,
the burglary graph is fluctiative
. After Correct your spelling
fluctuating
Wrong verb form
reaching
reached
the Wrong verb form
reaching
higest
Correct your spelling
highest
number
in 2004, then
it sharply decreased till 2008 reached the lowest value which is 1000 numbers. After that, it went with constant progres
till 2012.
Correct your spelling
progress
Last
, the
car theft which shows slowly decreased Correct article usage
apply
by
2003 to 2006, and Change preposition
from
the
quite Correct article usage
apply
sharp
increased Change the word
sharply
by
2006 to 2012. In the Change preposition
from
last
year, it took the first place of the highest number
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