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Write a letter to an editor of a newspaper about a mistake from a recent article. Include What the mistake was How they can correct it How to avoid this mistake in the future

Dear sir, I hope you are doing great. My name is Lovepreet Kaur. I am living in Bathinda. The purpose of writing
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 letter is to tell you about a mistake in one of your recent
articles'
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. The passage was published in,"The Tribune" on 25 April
,
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 2025 and it was about The Museum called as Virasat-E-Khalsa.
This
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 museum is in Jalandhar. The article was full of knowledge related to the Sikh empire and
the
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 rulers. You
also
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 mentioned about the warriors.
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, in that article, there was a section related to open hours for visiting
museum
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, where you mentioned that it is open seven days a week. But
last
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 weekend, I planned a trip with my family. When we reached there the authorities told us that they are not open at weekends.
According to
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 me, you should publish another article in which you should inform people about the proper timing and days for visiting there. So, other people would not waste their holiday. You should be careful before printing any information.
For
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future
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, I shall suggest
you
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that before
making
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a
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proper research you
would
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 never publish any inaccurate information. It may mislead a large group of people. Hoping for your consideration. Yours Faithfully, XYZ

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grammar
Make sure to proofread your letter for minor grammatical errors, such as 'your recent articles'' which should be 'your recent article.'
coherence
Try to ensure that each paragraph flows smoothly into the next. You might want to use more connecting phrases to improve coherence.
task response
When proposing a solution, provide a bit more detail about how they can correct the mentioned mistake.
task achievement
The letter effectively identifies the mistake and provides a clear suggestion for correction, demonstrating strong task achievement.
coherence
The overall structure of your letter is logical and separate ideas are mostly well contained within paragraphs.
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