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You live in a block of flats; your neighbour makes a lot of noise which has caused problems for you. Write a letter to your landlord. In your letter, you should: explain the situation tell him/her how you are effected by this Suggest what you want the landlord to do.

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Dear Landlord, My name is Gurpinder, a tenant living in one of your apartments. To be more specific, I am living in flat 44 in the Kanata. I am writing
this
 letter to complain about my neighbours and their behaviour.
To begin
 with, they are always having parties in their house, including weekdays and midnights .
Moreover
, they are not following the rules of society namely less gathering in our homes
due to
 COVID. Apart from that, there has always been trash on the floor near the garbage area like bottles, and pizza boxes.
Furthermore
,
this
 situation has a great impact on me
as well as
 my family.
Firstly
, my grandmother is feeling irritated and has pain in her heart
due to
 no peace, since the doctor recommended her to do proper bed rest because of her heart issue.
In addition
, I am not able to concentrate on my
further
 studies because of loud music. I would like you to make a few rules regarding the party and its timing,
for instance
, no loud music or noise after 10.
Secondly
, could be please send a warning letter to control them.
Last
 but not least, it would be better not only for me but
also
 for you to find these people to disobey any rules. I look forward to hearing from you. Thanks in advance. Yours faithfully, Gurpinder
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coherence cohesion
Ensure that each paragraph focuses on a single idea or point. This will improve the overall coherence and cohesion of the letter.
coherence cohesion
Use a more formal greeting and closing in the letter to match the formality of the situation and the recipient (the landlord).
lexical resource
Expand your range of vocabulary to improve the overall quality of writing. Using a wider variety of words and expressions will enhance the lexical resource.
grammatical range
Work on using a wider range of complex and compound sentence structures to demonstrate a more advanced level of grammatical range.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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