The map illustrates the between and predicted future Islip town centre.
The map represents the recent look of an Islip
town
centre
and how it has been planned for the future.
Overall
, the town
centre
has been planned to develop with lots of new facilities
,
According to
the development plan, the shops which used to be in the north of town
next to the main road have been planned to be replaced with a bunch of facilities
, like, a car park, shopping centre
, bus station, and new houses. The main road has been planned to be restricted to pedestrians only, which separates the old shops and new facilities
. An introduction of new housing has been planned next to the old shops, near the park. The most important development could be seen in the form of a dual carriageway which circulate
the Change the verb form
circulates
town
centre
by passing school, and housing and would connect all facilities
with a separate exit to the new housing.Submitted by umark5353 on
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