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You live in a block of flats; your neighbour makes a lot of noise which has caused problems for you. Write a letter to your landlord. In your letter, you should: explain the situation tell him/her how you are effected by this Suggest what you want the landlord to do.

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Dear Harry, I am writing a
complain
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 regarding
noise
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the noise
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 problem at my house. Since we shifted to
this
 flat we
face
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have faced
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 lots of
noise
 from
neighbouring
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the neighbouring
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 side.
Besides
this
, I changed my flat because of
noisy
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the noisy
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 area and I like to live in a quiet place.
However
, next to my home the neighbour
is
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made
much
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a lot of
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noise
 and disturbed me at night time. A group of people are musicians and they played instruments in the evening. When my children
are starts
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start
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studing
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studying
 they
felt
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feel
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disturbance
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disturbed
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 and cannot study well. Even we cannot sleep properly at night.
Furthermore
, my mother has
heart
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a heart
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 problem and she feels uncomfortable with
this
 buzzing.
Doctor
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The doctor
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 has advised
to
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me to
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 keep
rest
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resting
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 and sleep well but
this
noise
 is
wrosing
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the reason
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of
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for
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this
 situation. I would like to please request
to
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them to stop playing music at night. If they play instruments in the morning it will release our stress and we sleep peacefully. I am looking forward to hearing from you as soon as possible. Yours Sincerely,
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task response
Ensure a clear and specific response to all aspects of the task. Include detailed information about the noise problem, its impact, and a clear suggestion for the landlord.
coherence and cohesion
Improve the organization of ideas and the logical flow of the letter. Use appropriate paragraphing and connectives to enhance coherence and cohesion.
lexical resource
Diversify the vocabulary and use a wider range of vocabulary to express ideas more precisely and effectively.
grammatical range
Work on sentence structure and grammar to reduce errors and enhance fluency and accuracy.
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