You live in a block of flats; your neighbour makes a lot of noise which has caused problems for you. Write a letter to your landlord. In your letter, you should: explain the situation tell him/her how you are effected by this Suggest what you want the landlord to do

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Dear Harry, I am writing a

complain

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complaint

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regarding the

noise

problem at my house. Since we shifted to

this

flat we have faced lots of

noise

from the neighbouring side.

Besides

this

, I changed my flat because of the noisy area and I like to live in a quiet place.

However

, next to my home the neighbour made a lot of

noise

and disturbed me at night time. A group of people are musicians and they played instruments in the evening. When my children start studying they feel disturbed and cannot study well. Even we cannot sleep properly at night.

Furthermore

, my mother has a heart problem and she feels uncomfortable with

this

buzzing. The doctor has advised me to keep resting and sleep well but

this

noise

is the reason for

this

situation. I would like to please request them to stop playing music at night. If they play instruments in the morning it will release our stress and we sleep peacefully. I am looking forward to hearing from you as soon as possible. Yours Sincerely,

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task response

Ensure that the letter includes a clear and direct request to the landlord to address the noise issue. Also, consider providing specific details about the noise problem and its impact on your daily life.

coherence cohesion

Consider reorganizing the information in the letter to improve the flow and coherence. Additionally, use linking words and transition phrases to connect ideas more effectively.

lexical resource

Expand your use of varied vocabulary to express ideas more precisely. Additionally, use more formal language and expressions that are suitable for a letter to a landlord.

grammatical range

Review sentence structure and punctuation to enhance the clarity and accuracy of the writing. Make sure to use a wider range of grammatical structures to demonstrate language proficiency.

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Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
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Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

177 words

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