The chart below shows the results of a survey about people's coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities.

The chart below shows the results of a survey about people's coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities.
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The bar chart depicts the outcomes of a survey during the
last
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four weeks on three different ways in which dwellers of five cities in Australia are buying and drinking their
coffee
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or tea.
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,
while
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the most popular choice in all, except
Adelaide
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, is going to a Cafe, the least one is buying fresh
coffee
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without exception. As the graph illustrates, Melbourne with just under 65% has the highest contribution for going to a Cafe choice and the least share belongs to
Adelaide
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,
while
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it loses the lead to instant
coffee
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with a small deviation, standing just below 50%. All other cities fall between these two. In all five cities, citizens chose instant
coffee
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as their second option, again not
Adelaide
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, and the largest portion belongs to Hobart with about 55% and the smallest over 45% is for Sydney. As for the third option, there has been a consensus among all of them on buying fresh
coffee
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in their
last
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four weeks.
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, the most severe number for fresh
coffee
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is lower than 45% belongs to Sydney, and the least intense of for Brisbane and
Adelaide
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with around 35%.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "last, while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words coffee, adelaide with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • survey results
  • coffee and tea buying habits
  • instant coffee
  • fresh coffee
  • cafe culture
  • social influences
  • economic factors
  • city demographics
  • seasonal trends
  • marketing strategies
  • consumer preferences
  • availability
  • popularity
  • consumption patterns
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