The chart below shows the changes in three different areas of crime in MAnchester city center from 2003-2012.

The line graph depicts the amends in three different places of crime in Manchester

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between 2002 and 2012.

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, it is noticeable that burglary was the most popular type of crime before 2007 when car

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theft

replaced it.

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, there

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upward trends from robbery and car theft,

whereas

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burglary showed downward trends over the period in question.

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with burglary, it accounted for nearly 3,500 which rose marginally to under 4,000 in 2004.

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, it fell significantly to 1,000 roughly in 2008.

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, it was erratic in the final

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and obtained approximately 1,500. With regards to car theft, it decreased progressively from under 2,500 to

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2,000 in 2006.

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, it showed

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in the next 6

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approximately 2,700 and was the area which had

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of crime throughout the period. In terms of

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it obtained 500 which went up to 1,000 in 2005 before dropping to 500 again in 2006 and maintaining the same level during the next three

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, it rose dramatically to 700 in 2010 and dropped to 600 in the final

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and was the type of

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which had

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lowest number of crimes over the period in question.