The graph below shows the favorite sport of people from the US between 1985 and 2015

The graph below shows the favorite sport of people from the US between 1985 and 2015
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The graph below shows the favorite sport of people from the US between 1985 and 2015
The given line graph illustrates the comparison of 5 favourite
sports
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of US citizens for 30
Years
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from 1985 to 2015.
Overall
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, three kinds of
sports
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( football, basketball and other
sports
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) experienced an increase in the percentage of
population
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the population
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who played those
sports
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over 30
years
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.
In contrast
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, the number of American
people
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who are attracted to
baseball
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and hockey decreased gradually during the given period. Looking into the details,
it is clear that
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from 1985 football was the most popular sport with almost 38 % of society
then
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increased slightly to almost 40 % of citizens before declining slightly to 35 % in 2000. After 5
years
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the
figure
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rose to roughly 42 % and
then
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remained steady until 2015. Starting from first and third position other
sports
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and basketball had 5 % and 15 %
people
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who interested with
this
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sports
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. In around 2004 other
sports
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overtook hockey to become fourth place and
then
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continued to jump up to almost 25 % in 2015
while
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basketball had a slight decrease
figure
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from 1985 to 1990 and
then
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fluctuated from 15 % population in 1995 to almost 20 % in 2005.
finally
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,
This
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figure
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overtook
baseball
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in around 2010 at approximately 22 % and occupied second place in 2015 with almost 25 %
people
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.
In contrast
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, starting from the second position population, the passion of UK citizens for
baseball
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tended to decrease from 35 % in 1985 to just under 20 % making it occupy the third position.
Likewise
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, in
baseball
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, in 1985 10 % of American
people
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joined hockey.
This
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figure
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remained constant after 10
years
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before decreasing slightly to just under 5 % during the end of the period.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "in contrast".
Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words sports, years, people, baseball, figure with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 5 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "just under" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "slightly" was used 4 times.
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