The line graph shows the average number of patients
the line graph provides information on the average number of
patient
in four different Fix the agreement mistake
patients
clinic
in a hospital over Change to a plural noun
clinics
the
specific periods of time. In general, patients in Correct article usage
apply
eye
clinic Correct article usage
the eye
increase
significantly when both diabetic and dental patients went up slightly Wrong verb form
increased
whereas
the patient
in Fix the agreement mistake
patients
birth
control clinic Correct article usage
the birth
shows
fluctuating Wrong verb form
showed
number
.Fix the agreement mistake
numbers
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