Some children spend hours every day on their smartphones. Why is this the case? Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?

Thanks to

the

Correct article usage

apply

show examples

technology every single part of

lives

Correct article usage

the lives

show examples

of people

have

Correct subject-verb agreement

has

show examples

changed

which

Correct word choice

and

show examples

the same can be said for the

time

of

Change preposition

apply

show examples

some

children

spending

Wrong verb form

spend

show examples

on their smartphones.

This

provide

Change the verb form

provides

show examples

a

lorge

Correct your spelling

large

number of merits and e few demerits that

this

essay

discuss

Correct subject-verb agreement

discusses

show examples

about

Remove the preposition

apply

show examples

them

Correct pronoun usage

apply

show examples

. The Internet has facilitated human lives in many aspects.

For example

, nowadays people can buy everything

in

Change preposition

apply

show examples

online shopping and they

delivere

Correct your spelling

delivered

deliver

the things to them which can

decreased

Wrong verb form

decrease

show examples

air

and

Correct word choice

apply

show examples

pollution and

ofcourse

Correct your spelling

of course

traffic jams.

Moreover

, it provides a wide variety

online

Change preposition

of online

show examples

video games that

children

can play

in

Change preposition

on

show examples

their

phone

Fix the agreement mistake

phones

show examples

.

Furthermore

, schools use the Internet to hold

onlineclasses

Correct your spelling

online classes

so

puple

Correct your spelling

pupils

can utilize their phone to learn

somethings

Correct your spelling

some things

show examples

and widen their

horizens

Correct your spelling

horizons

toward the reality of

the

Correct article usage

apply

show examples

life. because of these provided instances, the

time

of

Change preposition

apply

show examples

many

children

spend

Change the verb form

spends

show examples

on these smart

gajets

Correct your spelling

gadgets

.

However

, it has a lot of advantages and disadvantages for the

children

. On the one hand, spending

numerous

Fix the agreement mistake

a lot of

show examples

time

on technological phones

provide

Correct subject-verb agreement

provides

show examples

a large number of benefits. First and foremost, people, particularly

children

, can

have

Unnecessary verb

apply

show examples

interaction

Replace the word

interact

show examples

with individuals all around

world

Add an article

the world

show examples

with the aim of sharing their ideas.

Secondly

, they can use some

spactacular

Correct your spelling

spectacular

websites

such

as

you tube

Correct your spelling

youtube

show examples

to learn any things regardless

their

Change preposition

of their

show examples

major and their country which is a poor country or a rich country.

On the other hand

, it is

undenyable

Correct your spelling

undeniable

that it

also

has e few drawbacks. First of all, it can cause many physical problems for those

children

.

For instance

, poor

eye-sight

Correct your spelling

eyesight

show examples

, obesity,

spinal-related

Correct word choice

and spinal-related

show examples

problems. Because, they have no physical activities during the

time

that they are using their phones.

Moreover

, there are some websites which they are not proper for their age like pornography. In general, in the contemporary era,

due to

the

Correct article usage

apply

show examples

tecchnological

Correct your spelling

technological

development, some

children

allocate most of their

time

to

use

Wrong verb form

using

show examples

their

smartphone

Fix the agreement mistake

smartphones

show examples

because they can play video

game

Fix the agreement mistake

games

show examples

and participate in useful

claase

Correct your spelling

classes

with

this

verstile

Correct your spelling

versatile

tool.

This

have

Change the verb form

has

show examples

a a lot of pros and

also

csome

Correct your spelling

some

come

ons, but I am of the opinion that its pros

outweight

Correct your spelling

outweigh

the cons.