The line chart below shows the results of a survey giving the reasons why people moved to the capital city of a particular country.
The graph illustrates the data collected from a
survey
about the reason
for moving to the capital city of a particular nation from year
2000 to 2015.
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the year
Overall
, moving for employment reason
dominated the Fix the agreement mistake
reasons
relocate
population, Replace the word
relocation
while
only small
amount of people went to Correct article usage
a small
capital
city for family / friends or adventure. Add an article
the capital
Study
was the second hot cause for driving the relocation.
Employment was the majority driver for men and women Add an article
The study
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who migrate
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migrated
capital
city and it Add an article
the capital
a capital
was
gradually increased from the beginning of 60000 to the peak of 90000 in 2010. Unnecessary verb
apply
Afterward
, Change the spelling
Afterwards
although
employment as the moving population went slightly down to below 90000 in 2015, it was the top reason
amoung
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among
four
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the four
categorys
. Visiting family / friends and having Correct your spelling
categories
category
adventure
were the least selection in the Fix the agreement mistake
adventures
survey
. Althought
they were both started at 1000 in 2000 and Correct your spelling
Although
graudally
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gradually
increase
across the Wrong verb form
increased
survey
reporting period, these two
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this two reason
these two reasons
reason
never above 20000 selection.
Study
being the second most selected option in the Add an article
The study
A study
survey
, it had a rapid growth In 2010, the study has
a Wrong verb form
had
pleature
and growth rate lower. For the latest reporting year, the Correct your spelling
pleasure
reason
with studening
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student
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Vocabulary: Replace the words survey, reason with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "growth" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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