The bar chart below shows the total number of Olympic medals won by twelve different countries.
The bar graph illustrates how many
winner
Change to a plural noun
winners
of
twelve different countries Change preposition
from
who
participated in Correct pronoun usage
apply
Olympics
.
Correct article usage
the Olympics
Overall
, the USA has the most gold
, silver
, and bronze
medals
while
Japan has the lowest total medals
. Japan is the least winner of gold
and silver
medals
and China is
currently Verb problem
apply
having
the lowest amount of Wrong verb form
has
bronze
medal
.
The USA has Fix the agreement mistake
medals
written
as Add a missing verb
been written
winner
of more than 2,000 Add an article
the winner
a winner
medals
in the olympics
with almost 1,000 Change the capitalization
Olympics
gold
medals
, above 500 of
Change preposition
apply
silver
medals
, and around 1,000 bronze
medals
. In contrast
, Japan is in rank
12th Wrong verb form
ranked
of
the Change preposition
in
olympic
Change the capitalization
Olympic
medals
collection with number
below 500.
The Japanese Add an article
the number
a number
is
winning around 250 Change the verb form
are
gold
and silver
medals
(approximately 125 each) which make
the country Correct subject-verb agreement
makes
as
the littlest in winning Change preposition
apply
gold
and silver
medals
. However
, China is having
the smallest amount of Wrong verb form
has
bronze
medals
, around 100.Submitted by buttercookies28
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