The bar chart below shows the total number of Olympic medals won by twelve different countries.

The bar chart below shows the total number of Olympic medals won by twelve different countries.
The bar graph illustrates how many
winner
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winners
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of
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from
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twelve different countries
who
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participated in
Olympics
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the Olympics
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.
Overall
, the USA has the most
gold
,
silver
, and
bronze
medals
while
Japan has the lowest total
medals
. Japan is the least winner of
gold
and
silver
medals
and China
is
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currently
having
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has
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the lowest amount of
bronze
medal
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medals
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. The USA has
written
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been written
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as
winner
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the winner
a winner
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of more than 2,000
medals
in the
olympics
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Olympics
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with almost 1,000
gold
medals
, above 500
of
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apply
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silver
medals
, and around 1,000
bronze
medals
.
In contrast
, Japan is
in rank
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ranked
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12th
of
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in
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the
olympic
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Olympic
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medals
collection with
number
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the number
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below 500. The Japanese
is
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are
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winning around 250
gold
and
silver
medals
(approximately 125 each) which
make
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makes
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the country
as
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apply
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the littlest in winning
gold
and
silver
medals
.
However
, China
is having
Wrong verb form
has
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the smallest amount of
bronze
medals
, around 100.
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