The charts below show what UK graduate and postgraduate students who did not go into full-time work did after leaving college in 2018. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar charts illustrate what graduate and postgraduate collegians did after college (excluding full-time jobs) in the year 2018.
Overall
, it can be seen that the majority of people from both of these groups continued their further
education. A smaller proportion found a part-time job and the least number of former students were involved with voluntary work. In general, the graduates outnumbered thousands the postgraduates in 2008.
The most sufficient part of graduates, 29,665, signed up for further
study in 2008, followed by 17,735 who found a part-time job and 16, 235 who were unemployed after getting their degree. The last
of them (3,500) became volunteers after graduation.
Although
postgraduates were fewer in this
year, similarly
to graduates, the highest number of them (2,725) continued their education in 2008. Just after them by little, 2,535 former collegians started not full-time jobs. The smallest proportion of postgraduate students were involved in voluntary work ( 345 people).Submitted by delulcheva on
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