Some people believe studying literature is essential for individual character building, while others think it wastes time. Discuss both views and give your opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge and experience.

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There is an opinion that studying

literature

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is very important for everyone's

character

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building,

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, there is

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another point of view that spending time

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reading something is useless. I believe that reading books may help you in many ways, but not build your individual

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with, learning

literature

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actually can help you in your life.

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, if you study

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, your knowledge will be improved. It is obvious that there are no books or lectures which are written by

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people.

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, spending time

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reading or studying

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can not be a waste of time.

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, if you study someone's biography or poems, you can probably read something interesting,

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think it over and,

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, get life's experience.

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not only can be exciting, but

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bring something special for everyone.

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, how can

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be something essential for your individual

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building? As an illustration, if you read any fairy tales where the main

character

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is kind and generous you would not have the same

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traits.

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I have read many stories, poems and other types of

literature

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, I do not think that influenced my

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, I am on the side of people who think that

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actually matters,

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, it is not essential for our

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building because of many other factors of individual

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building as parents, friends and close society in general.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

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Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

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245 words

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