The pie charts below show the percentage of five kinds of books sold by a bookseller between 1972 and 2012

The pie charts below show the percentage of five kinds of books sold by a bookseller between 1972 and 2012
The Pie Chart displays the sales of five kinds of books sold by a bookseller in 1972, 1992, and 2012.
Overall
, It is readily apparent that Adult
fiction
became the most popular by the year 2012 and other genres declined (Biography, Travel, and Others) As well, interest in Children's
Fiction
increased.
Firstly
, The percentage of Adult
fiction
sold increased over the years but rose significantly during 1992-2012, (20%, 25% to 45%)
In addition
, The proportion of children's
fiction
bought increased slightly throughout the years from 20%, 22%, to 25%.
On the other hand
, The percentage of retail
of
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biography and 'others' dropped
by
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2012 from 20% to 15% to 8% and from 25% to 20% to 12% respectively.
In contrast
, the figure of the genre Travel sold fluctuated over the years. It was 15% in 1972 and
then
rose to 18% in 1992 but
then
declined to 10% in 2012
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