The diagram below shows the manufacturing process for making sugar from sugar cane. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagram below illustrates the different stages of producing
sugar
out of Use synonyms
sugar
cane.
Use synonyms
This
process consists of seven important levels that should be Passed respectively in order to gain suitable outcomes.
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Firstly
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sugar
cane requires 2-2.5 years to be ready for harvesting. When they become perfectly raised, it is time to harvest. The Use synonyms
further
level can be done in two ways; Linking Words
such
as using an old fashioned method which farmer cut them by appropriate tools or completely machinery way can be intervened. Linking Words
Next,
the canes need to be crushed to produce mixed juice. The juice
has to be purified by a special filter. Linking Words
Then
pure liquid is poured into a container and evaporated by a heating system. The juice which turned into syrup should be put in a centrifuge. Linking Words
Therefore
, at Linking Words
this
stage Linking Words
sugar
crystals would be separated from the previous material. Use synonyms
Finally
, The crystals mentioned are left to be dried and
cooled. So the product is accessible to be used and sold.Linking Words
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