The graph below shows the consumption of 3 spreads from 1981 to 2007.

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people

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used 3 different types of oil in their food during the period of time 1981 to 2007. The units are measured in

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.

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, the utilization of butter was dominant at the beginning of the period

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it decreased dramatically by the end years.

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, fewer

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used low fat and reduced spreads in 1996 to increased overwhelmingly till 2001.

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,

margarine

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was the kiddo in terms of use by the first years. Most

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people

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preferred to cook with butter they

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nearly 141

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in 1981 to reach its peak at around 160 in 1986.meanwhile, it dropped significantly to reach

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100

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in 1991

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and after

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that it decreased gradually

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following

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years. The rate of using

margarine

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was fluctuating

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from the first year to 1991 it remained stable until 1996 they

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only 100

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of it. In 2001,

people

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was

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consumed low-fat , reduced

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spreads

and

margarine

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.

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around 83

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were consumed by

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of low-fat,reduced spreads and

margarine

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in 1996.