Both government investment in public transport systems and reductions in public transport ticket prices will help to reduce transport pollution greatly. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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networks and providing cheaper travel fees are effective in lowering

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brought about by vehicles. I believe that these measures are great solutions

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, these are not enough to address the problem of

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pollution

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. Various countries are currently experiencing the effects brought by

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, particularly from different transportation forms. In many cities,

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congestions

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to be the main problem

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commuters and other travelers. The noise and the heat coming from vehicles on the street

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up to the stream of annoying pollutants. The

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,

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, have been on trial and error with

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different strategies to provide solutions to the seemingly endless

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pollution

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. Some strategic plans are

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of wider roads, creating detours, and even

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more trains. They

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suggested that reducing the cost of bus and train tickets would lessen

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. In fact, some countries have adopted and applied

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but the problem of street congestion just gets worse. In my opinion, all stakeholders must meet together to halt the growing problems of

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pollution

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. In the first place, no one is exempted from

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jams.

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the mentioned strategies above are undoubtedly helpful, it does not fully cover the challenges. One primary factor why people buy more than one car is that it is affordable and various car companies offer convenient payment

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which can be tempting to buyers. Vehicle companies should be urged to regulate

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of units. In countries like Singapore,

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jams are a rare sight because not all

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can own a car,

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, the

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makes sure that all are comfortable with the public

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available. The country even promotes walking and they

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safe paths for cycling. In conclusion, there are so many ways we can improve

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should not solely focus on improving roads and reducing

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costs.