The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017.
The line graph depicts the
number
of tourists, in millions, who stayed on cruise ships or the islands during their visit from one of the Caribbean islands over an interval from 2010 to 2017. Use synonyms
Overall
, the total Linking Words
number
of visitors increased significantly. Use synonyms
In addition
, visitors opted to stay on cruise ships more than on the island until 2015 when that changed.
On the one hand, the Linking Words
number
of tourists who chose to stay on the island in 2010 started at about 0.25 Use synonyms
million
and gradually increased to 2 Use synonyms
million
in 2017. Use synonyms
However
, one noticeable change in figures is for 2012, which is the only point that it faced a decline.
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On the other hand
, the graph for travellers who stayed on the island is quite different than the two other lines. The Linking Words
number
here begins at around 0.75 Use synonyms
million
and with a small deviation stays there for next year. Use synonyms
Then
during the next two years fit went from 0.75 Linking Words
million
in 2011 to 1.5 Use synonyms
million
in 2013 and stayed there until 2015, afterwards, declined to about 1.5 Use synonyms
million
and Use synonyms
finally
stood at 1.5 Linking Words
million
again in 2017.Use synonyms
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