In the future all cars, buses, and trucks will be driverless. The only people travelling inside these vehicles will be passangers. Do you think the advantages of driverless vehicles outweigh the disadvantages?

With the rapid development of technologies,

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automotive

manufacturing will

makes

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all

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transportation into

driverless

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the driverless

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mode

, which is without

intervention

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of

human

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as a driver. I believe that

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kind

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will bring more benefits than the possible drawbacks they own.

Driverless

mode

of transportation will lead to a potential solution

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for efficiency in

time

and energy.

People

tend to spend most of their

time

in a day doing nothing other than driving, focusing on

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and traffic when they can actually do productive activities during the trip.

Moreover

, it will only waste of

time

and energy when they do it over and over again without having a solution. Meanwhile, with the

driverless

mode

,

people

can focus on doing a lot of tasks during the trip. Or even just relax and

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more minutes to rest before arriving at

destination

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. Another benefit is

people

can own their car even if they can not drive. The hardest thing that most

people

struggle with is

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for driving to get a

lisence

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licence

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, they have to put

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lof

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of effort and

time

until mastering

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it and

finally

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those hard procedure

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will become a lot easier with

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help of technology.

In addition

, it is undeniable that the probability of human error in a driving action is still high even though

people

already try their best to not make a mistake in it.

For instance

, older

people

who

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by themselves. In conclusion,

driverless

mode

in vehicles

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many great benefits which are including

of

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human safety, and

also

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efficiency in

time

and energy.