The chart below shows the process of waste paper recycling.
The chart gives information about through what order useless
paper
is being processed in the case of recycling, from its collection to the production of new papers.
overall
, the chart is based on six stages, starting with the waste paper
being collected from public companies to the manufacturing of usable paper
by paper making
machines.
In the first three stages, waste Add a hyphen
paper-making
paper
is collected from banks and other businesses, after which they are stored by hand in order to delete unsuitable ones. Following
this
, the amount of paper
that has not been removed, will sent to the transportation stage in which it will be delivered to the paper
mill.
In the last
three stages, once the paper
is delivered to the mill, they are being cleaned and pulped and extra materials like staples are also
removed. It is then
turned to the de-inking stage for the removal of inks and glues. Finally
, waste paper
is put in a paper
-making machine in order to manufacture usable ones.Submitted by z.rajabi on
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