The graph below shows the number of tourists going to three resorts in a small town from January to June. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The depicted graph reveals the
quantity
of Change the quantifier
number
tourists
who visited three different resorts
in a small town in a six-month time period (January to June). As can clearly be seen, ski
resorts
and cross-country ski
resorts
experienced a
fluctuating attendance, Correct article usage
apply
whereas
the number of campground visitors maintained stability throughout the given time period.
The ski
resort was most popular at the beginning of the year in January, with 8000 tourists
; in contrast
, campgrounds started with the fewest visitors, with 2000. In the following months, ski
resorts
exhibited a rapid plunge to 4000 tourists
in April, soon after skyrocketing to its apex of 10000 tourists
in May, and remaining at this
impressive level. Vice versa, cross-country resorts
opened the season with approximately 3000 tourists
, spiraling
upwards to its peak of 10000 Change the spelling
spiralling
tourists
in April, subsequently
shrinking to 6000 tourists
in June.
Despite that oscillation of popularity, campgrounds only saw a scant soaring
from January to April, from 2000 to 3500 Replace the word
soar
tourists
, and afterward
a Change the spelling
afterwards
meager
decline to 3000 Change the spelling
meagre
tourists
until June.Submitted by i.reichwaldt on
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 69%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words tourists, resorts, ski with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
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