In many countries around the world, rural people are moving to cities, so the population in the countryside is decreasing. Do you think that is a positive or a negative development?
Residents of the countryside would rather live in
cities
than in rural areas nowadays, Use synonyms
thus
the number of inhabitants is declining. Moving to Linking Words
cities
is a negative development that may lead to overpopulation which can cause Use synonyms
traffic
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shortage
.
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cities
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traffic
jams and high prices in real estate value. The Use synonyms
people
, who move to big Use synonyms
cities
, require a place to live, so there is a supply-demand issue that increases the costs of an apartment, so they become not affordable. Use synonyms
Therefore
, in the end, Linking Words
people
might be homeless or be trapped in poverty for the long term. Use synonyms
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, the growing population can cause Linking Words
traffic
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traffic
jams. Use synonyms
Hence
, it can be stressful and exhausting for Linking Words
people
to use public transport or vehicles on a daily basis.
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Secondly
, another thing to worry about is the shortage of jobs in Linking Words
cities
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Due to
immigration to urban areas, there is competition in the labour market. In Linking Words
this
regard, the employers might behave themselves inappropriately, Linking Words
as well as
decrease the salary or demand something Linking Words
that is
not their job description, because they can replace them with a new employee easily. Linking Words
This
can result in unemployment and low wages.
In conclusion, the given examples show the negative effects of urban relocations, it can harm every citizen Linking Words
as well as
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people
who move out. In order to avoid these problems, the government should improve the conditions of rural zones to make life in the countryside more attractive. Use synonyms
Otherwise
, urban resettlements will not stop.Linking Words
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