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The graph below shows the differences in wheat exports over three different areas. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.

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The graph below shows the differences in wheat exports over three different areas. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.
The line graph illustrates the changes
of
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in
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wheat
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exported
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exports
 from three distinct regions
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Australia
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: Australia
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, Canada, and the European Community over a six-year
period
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 from 1985 to 1990 . In Canada, from 1985 to 1986 spearing
wheat
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 went down slowly. There was a considerable growth in the number of
wheat
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transferring
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transfers
 between 1986 and 1988,
to
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by
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1989
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1989,
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 the number in distribution declined sharply. Over the
period
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 of a year from 1989 to 1990, the changes
of disseminating
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in
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wheat
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increased
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production increased
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 slightly.
Exporting
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Australia's wheat exports
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wheat
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 of
Australia
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 rose gradually between 1985 and 1986. Throughout
The
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period
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 from 1986 to 1990, there was a significant decrease in
passing on the
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wheat production
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wheat
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 in
Australia
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 . For a year from 1985 to 1986 , there was a slight plunge in carrying across
wheat
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 of the European Community. During a
period
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 of four years between 1986 and 1990, the number of
wheat
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 spreading rose steeply . As is illustrated by the line chart , it's evident that
while
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wheat
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 in Canada experienced a dramatic surge in
transferring
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production
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,outpacing the steadier rise observed in the European Community ,in
Australia
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 saw a notable plummet over the
period
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.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words wheat, australia, period with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "illustrates" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "slightly" was used 2 times.
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