The table below gives information on consumer spending on different items in five different countries in 2002.

The table below gives information on consumer spending on different items in five different countries in 2002.
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The graph illustrates data regarding the diversity of products consumers spend in five nations in 2002. In general, Turkey had the highest
percentage
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in most categories, except clothing/ footwear represented by Italy.
In contrast
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, Sweden had the lowest
percentage
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of consumption in 2 out of 3 categories, the other was
Spain
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. Food/ drink/ tobacco was chosen by 32,14% of users in Turkey, which was the highest among the five countries in 2002. The second highest
percentage
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was recorded by Ireland at 28,91%, followed by
Spain
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and Italy at 18,80% and 16,36%, respectively.
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was Sweden which had the lowest
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, at only 15,77%. Turning to clothing/ footwear,
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Italy had the highest proportion, at 9,00%, the lowest figure was Sweden, at only 5,40%. The next highest
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followed by Turkey,
Spain
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, and Ireland at 6,63%, 6,51%, and 6,43%, in sequence.
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, in Leisure/ Education, there was 4,35% of Turkish consumers chose, which was the first rank. In marked contrast,
Spain
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was the lowest choice at only 1,98%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words percentage, spain with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 5 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • consumer spending
  • items
  • countries
  • comparison
  • overview
  • table
  • data
  • information
  • proportion
  • percentage
  • figures
  • categories
  • expenditure
  • purchases
  • spending habits
  • trends
  • average
  • highest
  • lowest
  • variation
  • pattern
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